To be honest, I don't recall much of how you were leyning except for the donkey voice - which I found inapproriate.

Please also be aware that it is one thing to comment on my blog, but it is another to go off on your own tangents. That is, stating your opinion on my opinions on the parsha is fine, but going off on a tangent about how you read Torah is something that belongs on your own blog. Please try to stay on-topic.

And I don't think the donkey interrupts the flow of the story at all. I think it fits right in - as you can tell from my approach to the parsha as a folk tale.